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25
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Added
damn the clarion,
revised and promoted
the three monks,
harvest,
lord pisswater’s clarion and
invention of
uncivil law.
I revisited all of
uncivil law
and edited
age,
injustice,
complexity,
flame (from flames),
money,
magistrates,
consent,
piano,
citizen and
fear.
It’s almost ready to send off; I just need to given
invention
time to settle down.
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24
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Revised the three monks,
uncivil law’s invention,
lord pisswater’s clarion,
beer and pindar,
Hymnen
Man Solo,
Regrow ::
Father,
and harvest. I need to check up
on Shiva; come to think of it, I need a good poetic translation of the Gita.
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22
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I read the current version of
the three monks last night to
the White Hart group of poets, and it worked a treat. People wanted to know
how to get there, and I was interrogated about the B–52s.
Roger Elkin, the editor of Envoi, has written saying that
he wants to publish the Regrow sequence
in issue 135. Envoi is the UK poetry magazine. I didn’t submit
Regrow :: Manifesto.
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21
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Revised
the three monks,
harvest,
lord pisswater’s clarion
(retitled from The Daily Mail)
and
uncivil law’s invention.
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20
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Added
the three monks,
harvest,
The Daily Mail
(the UK’s most popular racist publication),
and (Gordon Bennett) another
uncivil law—invention.
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18
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Made a one word change to
Man Solo from
Hymnen.
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14
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Made a minor change to
The Joy Of Tax, which
clearly needs more work. Retitled Feedback as
contact.
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13
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Promoted
both On Poetry poems
(select and
techno).
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10
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Revised against those who piss in, and retitled it
poetry and parasite.
I really can’t decide whether this essay,
and techno, poetry,
should remain tight prose or become poetry,
so I’ve created two versions,
one of each
(the poems are
select and
techno, combined
on poetry).
It’ll be interesting to see how they diverge—and, boy,
has techno diverged.
I should have done this with
uncivil law.
Redistributed poems with titles starting with of, on and at in
the poetry index
so they are not placed by those words.
Made a minor change to
beer and pindar.
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9
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Edited and promoted IR35, and renamed it The Joy Of Tax.
Edited an engineering rush
_3_.
My reading of that poem, and especially green, at
CB1 poets (in Cambridge) last night went well.
It’s nice to have quality poets congratulate you.
Added against those who piss in. Not sure whether it’s a poem
or prose. As usual, I’ve written prose, and revised it down to get rid of the superfluous, the
wasted and the wrong, and have ended up with a prose poem. I may abandon the prose section.
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8
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Edited an engineering rush
_3_ and
techno, poetry. Tidied up the last few days entries on this page.
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7
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Revised the site’s front door to emphasize the collections.
Edited techno, poetry.
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6
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Continued revising the fonts. Retitled Cork back to
Assam.
Edited IR35.
Added the prose section,
added “hello” (which was
about in and),
introduced the essay “techno, poetry”, and
restored a 1998 essay on the Citroën
“XM”.
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5
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Fixed chase chase (oops),
amended Cavity Wall Insulation,
renamed The Reproduction Of Isolation back to
Damage,
and expanded IR35.
The home page was unreadable with silly browsers which default to small serif.
I have wandered the site, increasing the architectural text size,
removing some decorative links. Finally, I’ve reduced some photographic sets,
rearranged others, and removed a couple.
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3
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Amended bathroom spider
and promoted it, along with Copyleft
and all three Software Engineering poems.
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2
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Somewhat predictably,
amended
Copyleft and
bathroom spider.
Again.
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